Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Taed Augustus

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Taed Augustus

• Nominated by: Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:32, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:Got tired of WP:VG's CAnom compartment being empty and the CAnom page being so low.

(3 ECs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Nice.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:16, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
2. Indeed. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:40, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
3. SinisterSamurai 02:19, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
4. Eyrezer 01:16, August 21, 2011 (UTC)
5. Talrrivanian ^{(Headquarters)}
6. ~Savage 12:41, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
7. Sorry, completely forgot. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 00:27, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Object

1. I think titles and professions are usually linked/stubbed for quality articles. SinisterSamurai 22:02, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
   • Is that what you were talking about? Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:13, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
     • In fact, it is. SinisterSamurai 02:19, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
2. Floyd has two things:
   • A little context on the TIE Advanced x1 is needed.
     • Try that.
   • "He was Force choked to death by Vader when the Sith Lord took insult at the man's overtures of familiarity, calling him "Darth" more than once during the presentation." The way this is worded, it sounds like Vader is the one calling him "Darth". Please reword.
     • Got it.
   • Other than that, nice job. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 00:25, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
     • Thanks Floyd. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 20:45, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
       • I would just like to remind IFYLOFD that this objection was responded to over three weeks ago.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:16, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
3. Bob
   • Is the opening quote your personal transcription from the game, or is that how it's written down somewhere? If the former, it needs some copy editing.
   • Context on Sienar Fleet Systems (that it was a starship manufacturer) and TIE advanced (that it was a starfighter) should be added. Other than that, looks good. ~Savage 17:22, August 28, 2011 (UTC)
     • Got it. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:43, August 29, 2011 (UTC)
       • What about the quote? ~Savage 01:43, August 30, 2011 (UTC)
         • Sorry about the delay, the quote is taken straight from the databank, so that's how it appears in the game. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 20:31, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

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