Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/TC-17

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TC-17

  • Nominated by: Holocron Greatholocron (Complain) 08:04, February 14, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: No CSWE. WP:NSW's third CA if it passes.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. Darth Morrt 14:52, February 15, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Glad to see all of these WP:NSW CAs! Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 21:26, February 17, 2011 (UTC)
  3. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 05:33, February 21, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ECvote --Eyrezer 10:26, February 21, 2011 (UTC)
    Krzyjstr13 20:01, February 21, 2011 (UTC) (Vote struck, reason: Per policy: Not enough main namespace edits. -- NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 20:37, February 21, 2011 (UTC))

Object

  1. Quick question: do we know for certain that multiple units in the Brotherhood uesed TC-17s, and not just the Gloom Walkers? Also, I've fixed this myself since it's a minor problem and easily fixed, but since I've noticed it in many of your noms, please remember to italicize novel and source titles as appropriate in the BTS. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:41, February 17, 2011 (UTC)
    • Seemed like it was a fairly standard issue rifle for the Brotherhood. Sorry about the titles, I've been getting better at that, but it's not perfect yet. Holocron Greatholocron (Complain) 21:17, February 17, 2011 (UTC)
      • The problem is that that's exactly the kind of supposition we can't really make. If the source doesn't actually give any indication whatsoever that it was used for any unit other than the Gloom Walkers, then we can't say so ourselves. Check out the wording adjustment I made to avoid making this supposition in the article. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 21:26, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

  • I've made some minor changes in the article. Feel free to revert anything you found incorrect. I've taken care of short sentences, outdated infobox and underlinking. Darth Morrt 09:06, February 14, 2011 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the copy-edit. No real problems with anything, but does Brotherhood of Darkness belong in the culture area? I thought that was so that the certain weapons (e.g. some tribal spear) could have a box for their origins. Holocron Greatholocron (Complain) 09:16, February 14, 2011 (UTC)
      • You're right, removed. Darth Morrt 14:52, February 15, 2011 (UTC)
  • I added information about Lucia. Feel free to reword it.--Krzyjstr13 20:03, February 21, 2011 (UTC)