Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/T'un

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 15:34, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Are Jon and I the only two persons who bothered writing articles from the Jedi Apprentice series?

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---501st Dogma^(Comlink) 16:34, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
"If the data is not in our Archives, it was probably stolen."--Jocasta Nu. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 20:17, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
Irid, but that's just one. NaruHina ^Talk 20:54, January 16, 2012 (UTC)
Nice job remembering Category:Individuals of unidentified species on these articles. :) —Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 00:40, January 18, 2012 (UTC)
Tinwe^(comlink) 14:25, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Object

The Premier
- "During that year, several of the data maintained by T'un was stolen, although Jedi Master Qui-Gon Jinn was able to recover them." Several followed by "was" is grammatically incorrect. It needs replaced by "were."
  - Ah, thanks. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 16:22, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
- ~~Also, the following sentence starts with "Jedi Master." Which Master, Jinn or T'un?~~
  - Clarified. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 16:22, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
- Great work. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 16:19, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
  - Thank you. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 16:22, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
The Uncertain Path mentions T'un to be "a wizened being of great learning." This should be mentioned, but I'll leave it up to you whether you want to make a separate P&T for it or mention it in the body of the article. Tinwe^(comlink) 10:34, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
- Added. Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 14:06, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
  - I tweaked it a little so that it doesn't stick out as much, see if that's okay. Otherwise, looks good. :) Tinwe^(comlink) 14:25, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

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