Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Sy Snootles: Live!

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Sy Snootles: Live!

• Nominated by: Panther436 (talk) 01:41, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: She's an icon
• Date Archived: 22:50, 11 December 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 182 words (0 introduction, 146 body, 36 behind the scenes)
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(4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. small review note that I've nicked out the 'first' in the BtS, since it's a single-source article, per precedent —spookywilloww^talk 01:05, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
2. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 14:33, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
3. Lewisr (talk) 16:30, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
4. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 22:49, 11 December 2023 (UTC)

Object

Anil

• The mention of "rescue of Han Solo" requires some tweaking and sourcing as the story itself doesn't mention Han at all. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:26, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Reworded Panther436 (talk) 06:22, 8 December 2023 (UTC)

Macaroni

• I think the story mentions enough of Snootles's musical career to cite that fact to the story. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:14, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Changed Panther436 (talk) 06:22, 8 December 2023 (UTC)

Lew

• The date field looks as though it can be filled in Lewisr (talk) 15:26, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Not sure if that's what you meant but I made a connection Panther436 (talk) 16:26, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
    • That works, thanks Lewisr (talk) 16:30, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
• I'm not really sure the mention of the Khetanna's explosion is needed/relevant, simply noting it was in that year is enough Lewisr (talk) 15:26, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Removed Panther436 (talk) 16:26, 8 December 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 22:49, 11 December 2023 (UTC)