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Sy Snootles: Live!
- Nominated by: Panther436 (talk) 01:41, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: She's an icon
- Date Archived: 22:50, 11 December 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 182 words (0 introduction, 146 body, 36 behind the scenes)
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Support
small review note that I've nicked out the 'first' in the BtS, since it's a single-source article, per precedent —spookywillowwtalk 01:05, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 14:33, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 16:30, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:49, 11 December 2023 (UTC)
Object
Anil
The mention of "rescue of Han Solo" requires some tweaking and sourcing as the story itself doesn't mention Han at all.Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:26, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
- Reworded Panther436 (talk) 06:22, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
Macaroni
I think the story mentions enough of Snootles's musical career to cite that fact to the story.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:14, 8 December 2023 (UTC)- Changed Panther436 (talk) 06:22, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
Lew
The date field looks as though it can be filled inLewisr (talk) 15:26, 8 December 2023 (UTC)- Not sure if that's what you meant but I made a connection Panther436 (talk) 16:26, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
I'm not really sure the mention of the Khetanna's explosion is needed/relevant, simply noting it was in that year is enoughLewisr (talk) 15:26, 8 December 2023 (UTC)- Removed Panther436 (talk) 16:26, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 22:49, 11 December 2023 (UTC)