Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Swift Return/Legends

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Swift Return

  • Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:27, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Part One...

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 20:20, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
  2. See my comment below. -- 1358 (Talk) 12:59, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
  3. ECvote SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 14:35, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. Only once in a lifetime
    • I'm by no means an expert at TCW, so bear with me…
    • The Swift Return first appeared, also only as a compure readout, in Cat and Mouse… First off, do you mean "computer" when you say compure readout? Second, could you reword slightly?—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 21:28, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
      • Fixed.
    • That's all I have.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 21:28, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
      • Thanks. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:36, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Mention in the bts that its name was given in aurebesh in the episode, and that the episode guide simply confirmed the name in English. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 23:23, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
    • Mentioned. Thank you. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:58, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Swift Xd
    • Novelization should not be italicized (references).
      • Ugh, I hate that reference. Fixed.
    • Why do you have [1][3] in the intro? It looks like the episode guide ([3]) would suffice.
      • Meh. Fixed.
    • -- 1358 (Talk) 11:02, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
      • Thank you. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:58, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

  • One thing: Airdate for Cat and Mouse? -- 1358 (Talk) 12:59, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
    • Meh. Not really important for the article, but if you insist on it please let me know and I add it. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:54, August 30, 2010 (UTC)