Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Suicide shocker

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Suicide shocker

• Nominated by: Samonic 07:57, 30 July 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Personal version of the Grysks' self-destruct mechanism.
• WookieeProject (optional): The Mandalorian Novels

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 22:37, 1 August 2022 (UTC)
2. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 09:47, 2 August 2022 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:15, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
4. Fan26 (Talk) 17:59, 8 August 2022 (UTC)

Object

Braha

• There needs to be more coverage about the episode in the BtS (see current Mando SAs).
• I think the wording of the attack can be more specific than assaulted. They have basically taken over the ship by that point. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 09:18, 31 July 2022 (UTC)
  • All should be done. Samonic 09:38, 31 July 2022 (UTC)
• The episode director should also be mentioned. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 10:33, 1 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Novel bts are easy, it seems :P Done. Samonic 10:44, 1 August 2022 (UTC)
• "eleventh" episode makes it sound like its part of the same season as Chapter 1 to 8. You should specify that it's S2 E3. I would also like to point you in the direction of using "Star Wars: The Mandalorian Season Two Companion" — Star Wars Insider 202 as a reference. Both season companions give you the air dates, episode orders, and directors. Their use is generally encourage over the D23 (see the referencing in the Mando SAs). Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 22:23, 1 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. Samonic 22:33, 1 August 2022 (UTC)

Macaroni

• The way it's written right now implies that only humans can use it.
  • We haven't seen non-humans using it. Samonic 07:49, 1 August 2022 (UTC)
    • We also haven't seeing them not using it, if that makes sense. There's no reason to assume that it's a human-only device. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:55, 1 August 2022 (UTC)
      • Very well, changed. Samonic 20:56, 1 August 2022 (UTC)
• The bts date appears to be wrong.
• I don't think mentioning Favreau is necessary. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 06:05, 1 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Both done. It seems I confused Chapter 10's release date with Chaptwr 11's. Samonic 07:52, 1 August 2022 (UTC)

Fan

• "an Imperial captain member of an Imperial remnant " This bit here does not flow smoothly. I'd recommend just describing him as a captian serving a remnant of the Galactic Empire, pipelinking thru remnant.
• "the Imperial's Gozanti-class..." Just say "his Gozanti-class..." Fan26 (Talk) 18:32, 1 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Addressed. Samonic 20:54, 1 August 2022 (UTC)

Thrawn

• There is an article about the specific Gozonti, so it should be linked instead of the general article. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 21:01, 1 August 2022 (UTC)
  • …done. Samonic 21:06, 1 August 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:01, 8 August 2022 (UTC)