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Strazen
- Nominated by: Chipchip88 (talk) 16:06, 11 July 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: First ever Nom and COM
- Date Archived: 18:19, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 109 words (0 introduction, 76 body, 33 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR, WP:COMICS
(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
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Support
Remarkably clean for your first nomination. Hope to see more from you!—spookywillowwtalk 20:53, 19 July 2023 (UTC)- Lewisr (talk) 21:15, 22 July 2023 (UTC)
- —SnowedLightning (they/them) 21:22, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
- Fan26 (Talk) 18:18, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
Object
Lew
Welcome to the CAN! I think you should do some moving around so that the mention of Strazen being wanted by the Namoi comes after it's established the year, since it seems more like he was wanted by them specifically around that timeLewisr (talk) 21:03, 19 July 2023 (UTC)- I want to make sure I get this right. Just to clarify, I believe Wozo is the one wanted by the Namoi, not Strazen. Chipchip88 (talk) 02:09, 20 July 2023 (UTC)
- Tried fixing it up to clarify Wozo was wanted by the Namoi, not Strazen, and rearranged to have the year be mentioned in the first sentence. Chipchip88 (talk) 19:52, 20 July 2023 (UTC)
- Oops my apologies, I did mean to say Wozo but for some reason typed Strazen
Unless I'm missing something, it seems like he is referring to Strazen when he says Strat, so that and the quote from Wozo that Strat better have a planet-hopper should be addedLewisr (talk) 22:36, 20 July 2023 (UTC)- Added. I believe Strat is a nickname for Strazen. Chipchip88 (talk) 01:23, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:18, 3 August 2023 (UTC)