Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Starfruit

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Starfruit

• Nominated by: Jade Moonstroller (talk) 02:02, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Don't typically do canon noms, but Starfruit is a no-brainer for me lol
• Date Archived: 00:14, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 111 words (0 introduction, 77 body, 34 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Novels, Wookieepedia:WookieeProject The High Republic

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Support

Object

Amazingly

• Type and description field of the infobox are empty.
  • Taken care of. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 20:47, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
• It needs a date note, unless the book dates itself to that year.
  • Oh silly me, forgot about dating. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 20:47, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
• Per the Layout Guide, the description of the fruit should come before the history.
  • Addressed. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 20:47, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
• I'm not completely sure about this objection myself, but can't taste (sourness, etc..) be subjective. If you deem it necessary, it would be better to state which characters found it sour.
  • I see what you mean, but Axel doesn't say "This fruit is sour," but it's more the author writing it that way. It may help to have second opinions on this. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 20:47, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
    • I see. If the author states this then I see no need for a second opinion. AmazinglyCool (talk) 20:59, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
• Copy edit: Don't forget to link to the Legends equivalent in the BTS. AmazinglyCool (talk) 02:20, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Oh, I see. Thanks! Jade Moonstroller (talk) 20:47, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
• You may wanna switch up the beginning of your second sentence or combine it with your first one as you start with the same word. AmazinglyCool (talk) 20:59, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Changed it. Or, changed to it rather. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 23:34, 16 April 2023 (UTC)

Macaroni

• The relevance of the Segaru murder isn't really clear here. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:14, 17 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Alright, I'll add when I get home today, but I missed some other stuff, so I might have to GAN it. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 18:21, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
    • Checking in on this. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:05, 5 May 2023 (UTC)

Lew

• Missing a couple more instances from the novel. One where Rev Ferrol takes one from a fruit vendor on E'ronoh in chapter 20, and then another with Axel in the following chapter Lewisr (talk) 04:15, 17 April 2023 (UTC)
  • I may or may not have read the chapter it was first in and then done this. I think it might go to GAN possibly. I'll certainly check into it. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 18:21, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
    • It happens :P any update? Lewisr (talk) 17:43, 4 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

• Taking over this nomination. Samonic ^(Talk) 12:43, 9 May 2023 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (EC only)

1. Unaddressed objections too far overdue; can be put into a new nom if taken over again.—spookywilloww^talk 22:27, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
2. Fan26 (Talk) 22:29, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
3. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 00:11, 13 May 2023 (UTC)