Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Star Forge Robe

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Star Forge Robe

  • Nominated by: –Tm_T (Talk) 13:22, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I always wanted to wear a long skirt.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

  1. OLIOSTER (talk) 18:47, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
  2. ECvote I love these robes.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 14:22, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
  3. ECvote 1358 (Talk) 18:06, November 15, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. These robes were long sand-brown, and only its.... This start just doesn't sit right with me, how about ...long and colored sand-brown ? Also, link brown. OLIOSTER (talk) 17:47, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
    • Done. And thanks for the notoc, forgot it. (: –Tm_T (Talk) 18:45, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Here's your review
    • "The Star Forge Robes were special Jedi robes that were made in an ancient Rakata artifact and massive automated shipyard, the Star Forge." The Star Forge is a bit over-contextualized, isn't it?
    • "Despite the fact that the Star Forge was a powerful tool of the dark side of the Force, only one immersed in the light side was able to wear them." First, I think you are missing 'robe' after Star Forge. Second, is it a tool of the dark side itself or the user?
      • Pretty sure the omission of robe is intentional. In the game, you only get these robes if you followed the light side, and they are restricted to the light side, thus, while the Star Forge feeds on the dark side, these robes are restricted to the light. OLIOSTER (talk) 21:33, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
    • Some small context on Malak, please?
    • 1358 (Talk) 21:08, November 14, 2010 (UTC)
      • I think I got these. (: –Tm_T (Talk) 21:43, November 14, 2010 (UTC)

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