Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Splinter Pass

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Splinter Pass

Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 22:14, May 13, 2014 (UTC)
Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 22:45, May 13, 2014 (UTC)
Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:05, May 14, 2014 (UTC)
501st dogma^(talk) 15:20, May 15, 2014 (UTC)
Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:01, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

~~No further stuff in the comic, e.g. that they really raced there during the events of Crash Point?~~ Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 21:00, May 13, 2014 (UTC)
- The race in the comic did go through the area, but nothing happened. I added in a brief bit about the character Kidd Kareen describing the Maze to Ahsoka Tano, if that's what you were looking for. --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 22:05, May 13, 2014 (UTC)
  - Is there a quote as you say "describe"? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:07, May 13, 2014 (UTC)
    - That's a good idea, heh. Consider it done! --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 00:42, May 14, 2014 (UTC)

~~I think it should be stated in the body of the article that some of the pillars/totems were durasteel, as the quote implies this.~~
- Alright, consider it done. --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 19:45, May 14, 2014 (UTC)
"...The two later participated in the Maze..." I think it should be that they participated in a race in the maze, not how it is currently. 501st dogma^(talk) 17:58, May 14, 2014 (UTC)
- Maze is the name of the event (Or rather, an abbreviation of it). While the course may be considered a 'maze' of sorts, that's not what the reference was too. Again, it's like saying "Dale Earnhardt participated in the Daytona 500" (Although, in truth, that can also be seen as "Dale Earnhardt participated in a race located at the Daytona 500", as I believe that is also the name of the stadium, but that's beside the point). --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 19:45, May 14, 2014 (UTC)

~~Aren't any of the other racers in that race identified? If they are you could include them with Tano and Kareen in the last sentence.~~ Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:53, May 22, 2014 (UTC)
- I'm not actually sure how necessary it is, as I'd figure that'd be better detailed for information on the races, but I added too that part now anyways. --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 17:28, May 28, 2014 (UTC)