Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/SmartTranq

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SmartTranq

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:46, January 26, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Another ETU nom

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)

Support

1. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 00:54, January 27, 2014 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 01:00, February 3, 2014 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 04:16, February 9, 2014 (UTC)

Object

A Force user

A couple things,

• Is the LBR in the BTS section an error?
  • Yes it is. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:39, January 26, 2014 (UTC)
• Can we get an approximate year for use? Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:04, January 26, 2014 (UTC)
  • I've added a timeframe by mentioning the Galactic Civil War, is that ok? Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:39, January 26, 2014 (UTC)
    • Very well. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 00:54, January 27, 2014 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• The repetition of air rifle in the opening should be changed.
  • Changed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:32, February 6, 2014 (UTC)
• The credit symbol comes before the amount of credits.
  • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:32, February 6, 2014 (UTC)
• Please make it clearer which company produced the air rifle.
  • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:32, February 6, 2014 (UTC)
• Please correct the author information in the BTS.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 00:25, February 6, 2014 (UTC)
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:32, February 6, 2014 (UTC)

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