Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Sliver (Rodian)

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Sliver (Rodian)

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:41, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:First of hopefully a number of SWTOR noms.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Stake black ^msg 22:56, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
2. —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 02:29, March 28, 2013 (UTC)
3. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:17, March 29, 2013 (UTC)
4. I probably passed this guy when I did the Bounty hunter. Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 01:16, March 29, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. Stake
   • Nice to see you here, Ayrehead! Couple of things:
   • The body should be more clear as to what was his profession. He was a salesman? This info should be in the first sentence.
     • I've put vendor as I think he's labelled as such. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:51, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
   • "Behind the scenes", not "Behind the Scenes". I'd fix it, but I want to make sure you know this.
     • Kindly fixed for me by Jedi Kasra before I saw the objection. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:51, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
   • Context on Nal Hutta. Where is it located? Don't forget the references for this info.
     • Added the system and region. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:51, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
2. Objection!
   • Please pick which tense should be used in the BTS, I recommend the past tense. Nice work, otherwise!—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 03:14, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
     • Changed to all past tense. Thanks! Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:51, March 27, 2013 (UTC)

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