Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Sev'rance Tann

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Sev'rance Tann

Nominated by: Editoronthewiki (talk) 00:00, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Surprise canonization!
Date Archived: 21:13, 10 February 2025 (UTC)
Final word count: 259 words (0 introduction, 148 body, 111 behind the scenes)
Word count at nomination time: 248 words (0 introduction, 149 body, 99 behind the scenes)
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~~A release date for the issue should be added~~ Lewisr (talk) 00:29, 6 February 2025 (UTC)
- Done! Editoronthewiki (talk) 00:44, 6 February 2025 (UTC)
For the sake of minimising references, the capital and Outer Rim cites can both be changed to Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know, Updated and Expanded Lewisr (talk) 00:29, 6 February 2025 (UTC)
- Fixed! Editoronthewiki (talk) 00:37, 6 February 2025 (UTC)
~~Missing the relevant gender/pronouns/species categories~~ Lewisr (talk) 00:29, 6 February 2025 (UTC)
- Added! Editoronthewiki (talk) 00:37, 6 February 2025 (UTC)

This might just be my opinion so feel free to disagree but I think one of the two statements here can be removed: either "With the battle turning against the Confederacy" or "as the clones pushed back the Separatist lines." They seem a bit redundant and they kind of combine to clunk up that sentence. Wok142 (talk) 21:51, 6 February 2025 (UTC)
- I understand and considered removing actually before nomming, but personally think it should remain since it gives detail to what happened in the battle specifically to force Dooku into retreat Editoronthewiki (talk) 02:43, 7 February 2025 (UTC)
  - Cool, leaving as is will be fine. Wok142 (talk) 17:44, 7 February 2025 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:12, 10 February 2025 (UTC)