Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Sector Police Subpost 186

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Sector Police Subpost 186

• Nominated by: Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 01:04, October 22, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Project CSF

(2 ECs/4 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:57, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
2. Trip391 (talk) 15:36, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
3. Supreme Emperor (talk) 21:06, October 26, 2013 (UTC)
4. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 23:32, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
5. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:43, October 31, 2013 (UTC)
6. 501st dogma^(talk) 19:45, November 9, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. Ayrehead
   • Does the book detail anyone going to the outpost to bail him out? If so you should mention it.
     • Added. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 14:50, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
   • Are the holding cells at the front desk or elsewhere in the outpost? the second sentence doesn't make it very clear. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:41, October 22, 2013 (UTC)
     • Clarified. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 14:50, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
2. A Force User
   • The quote mentions that it is in a sector. Does it say which one? Also, in the quote there is an uncapitalized letter. Is it in the source that way? Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 23:29, October 23, 2013 (UTC)
     • Yes and no; in this context sector doesn't actually refer to a location: "Sector Police" is what the book calls the CSF. However throughout the book it alternates capitalizing it i.e. sometimes its "Sector Police" and other times "sector police". In this sentence its all lowercase but since the book doesn't seem to standardize the capitalizing of titles even when it is a proper title. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 14:50, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
       • Thanks for clarifying about the CSF. And for the quote, I meant the start of the second sentence. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:17, October 26, 2013 (UTC)
         • Oh, duh, yeah that's incorrect fixed. :) Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 08:35, October 27, 2013 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi
   • In the BTS you say that the Outpost was mentioned, but in the appearances section you say it appeared. Which is correct?
     • Corrected
   • The quote makes it sound like the article title should be "Sector Police Subpost 186".--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 04:14, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
     • Moved. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 15:54, October 28, 2013 (UTC)

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