Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Saigok

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Saigok

  • Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 18:09, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: First nomination :)
  • Date Archived: 22:44, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 267 words (40 introduction, 214 body, 13 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 211 words (0 introduction, 198 body, 13 behind the scenes)
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(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)

(Votes required: 1 EC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 2 user or 1 EC vote required to pass.)

Support

  1. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 17:42, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
  2. CometSmudge (talk) 19:59, 27 April 2024 (UTC)

Object

JocastaBot
  • Current word count violates Comprehensive requirements: word count of body exceeds 165 words, but article lacks an introduction.JocastaBot (talk) 18:14, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
    • Objection(s) overridden by EduCorps 20:04, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
AnilBot
  • If the novel does suggest that saigok was a board game, I think you can fill the "type" field with that in the infobox.
  • There's also a Category:Board games for in-universe board games.
  • Per the Manual of Style, grammatical articles (such as a, an, and the) shouldn't be placed in pipelinks. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:06, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
    • Good to know. Fixed. Wok142 (talk) 19:58, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
  • Do you think there is enough room in the article body for a relevant image (an image of Kaasha, etc.)? TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:04, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
    • Think so, an image of Kaasha should work. Tossed that in there. Wok142 (talk) 02:59, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
Comet
  • Board game could also be linked to.
  • Since it's in the quote, maybe you should either specify that the toy Lando compared it to was cambiblocks or just pipelink toy there.(I hope I did this right)CometSmudge (talk) 03:18, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
    • Addressed both. Wok142 (talk) 15:30, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
spookly
  • Seems like a lot of the Description contains information that, in terms of precedent for game SAs, goes in History. To explain further, the last sentence is something that happened during [a period of time] and thus History. The characters' opinions of the game would too, as they are something that happens (as in, they speak that dialogue at a time) and their opinions arent immutable as fact for Description.
  • Even if just species, Kaasha should have at least one word of context in the intro.
  • Though this should stay in Description as well, its also notable History-wise about the Free Ryloth thing to add.
  • General precedent for canon intros would have 7 ABY somewhere in there as we usually try to keep the most relevant dates in intros whenever possible to give the reader a quick grasp of the subject.—spookywillowwtalk 04:49, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
    • I've gone ahead and rearranged some things in accordance with the above. Let me know if the results are suitable. Wok142 (talk) 21:47, 28 April 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Congrats on your first nomination! TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:06, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
    • Thank you! It's been long overdue haha. Wok142 (talk) 19:59, 25 April 2024 (UTC)