Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Safe House Three

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Safe House Three

  • Nominated by: Liverpool92Ackbar HS 20:55, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Haven't done one for awhile
  • Date Archived: 05:13, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 137 words (0 introduction, 102 body, 35 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 138 words (0 introduction, 103 body, 35 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS

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Support

  1. ECvote CometSmudge (talk) 16:55, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 04:54, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
  3. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 05:12, 27 August 2024 (UTC)

Object

Comet
  • Pronouns should no longer link to Gender
  • I think you should give Kes Dameron a little more context and mention that he's a commander.
  • I also think you should briefly describe what the safe house looks like CometSmudge (talk) 14:59, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
    • All fixed. Did my best to describe it but its only in that one panel.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS 02:26, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
      • The comic actually says he's a commander for some reason. I guess that's an error, but a separate reference would be needed to call him a sergeant.
      • I think if you also mentioned the run-down appearance of the building that would be good. CometSmudge (talk) 03:03, 25 August 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 05:13, 27 August 2024 (UTC)