Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Sacred Arena of Salka'a

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Sacred Arena of Salka'a

• Nominated by: Liverpool92 11:14, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: 242 words. If goes over will have to withdraw and wait for GANs to pass
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(Votes required: 2 EC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 3 user or 1 EC vote required to pass.)

Support

Object

Luca

• I would like to see the intro expanded to more than one sentence since there are three paragraphs in the body.
• The body could use another image.
• The Description section should include details about its location.
• Missing context for Rey.
• There are a few instances of missing links or double-links. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:25, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Second, fourth, and fifth handled. Waiting for my comment to be answered be I do the others.--Liverpool92 22:07, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
    • I don't think Rey has ever been called a Jedi Padawan, but I could be wrong. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:34, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
      • Sorry to comment in, but you could put Jedi-in-training per issue 1 of Allegiance Lewisr (talk) 16:41, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
      • Actually, Lewisr checked the TROS novel, and Rey is called "Jedi apprentice" there, so you can reference it to the novel. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:12, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
        • Fixed.--Liverpool92 02:59, 15 December 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Could the fight be shortened because I realized it doesn't completely relate to the arena?--Liverpool92 11:16, 7 December 2021 (UTC)