Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/S'hrah

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S'hrah

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:11, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I'm a article writer and not a....

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Dangit man, I'm not a doctor! Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 18:15, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
2. Doctor who?--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 20:19, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
3. Doctor-Donna, Cal. NaruHina ^Talk 23:06, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
4. Tinwe^(comlink) 15:58, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
5. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 21:29, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Object

1. Category:Individuals of unidentified species. This could possibly be a SOFIXIT, but I've noticed this on so many of your noms lately. Please see if you can watch that. Otherwise, looks good.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 20:16, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
   • Indeed. Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 20:17, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
2. "Known to have no tolerance for any discipline outside medicine, [he taught many pupils, [[including Jos Vondar,] who would later become a surgeon on the planet Drongar.]]" This is run-on sentence as it's an apositive within an apositive. Needs rejiggering. NaruHina ^Talk 06:58, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
   • While I do not understand a single word written above (:P), I somehow adressed this objection I believe. Take a look. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:47, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
     • It's deceptively difficult to explain for such a minor mistake. :p But grammars are grammared. NaruHina ^Talk 23:06, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

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