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Ryloth summer riots
- Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 04:59, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: novel isn't clear if the riots cease occurring post novel or how many summers they've happened, hence no end date and no definitive prev or conc events
- Date Archived: 04:59, 6 November 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 150 words (0 introduction, 133 body, 17 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 148 words (0 introduction, 131 body, 17 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS
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Support
Fan26 (Talk) 06:24, 4 November 2024 (UTC)- Wok142 (talk) 04:32, 5 November 2024 (UTC)
- Lewisr (talk) 05:39, 5 November 2024 (UTC)
Object
Wok
Given that the conjectural title is "summer riots," I think it would be best to not have "nighttime riots" be the bolded and italicized name in the article itself. I think you could either simply remove the word summer from the bold and italics or reword it to say summer riots and then afterwards mention the nighttime aspect.- I'd say Twi'leks should be detailed as the participants of the riots in both the prose as well as in the infobox
Examining the passage where the riots are mentioned, I personally feel that it is fair to say that the riots occurred in Lessu. What do you think?Wok142 (talk) 07:15, 4 November 2024 (UTC)- Sorted above.—spookywillowwtalk 02:50, 5 November 2024 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 04:59, 6 November 2024 (UTC)