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Ryloth Vent
- Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 18:56, 13 October 2022 (UTC)
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Support
- BloodOfIrizi
(talk) 21:45, 13 October 2022 (UTC) - Samonic
(Talk) 12:51, 15 October 2022 (UTC) - Vent ඞ Editoronthewiki (talk) 00:50, 16 October 2022 (UTC)
Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 03:46, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
Amogus Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:43, 2 November 2022 (UTC)
Object
InterGalactic shazil clan
is 'IGBC' used in an official source anywhere, or in the episode? if not, i think you should use 'Banking Clan' instead.BloodOfIrizi (talk) 21:45, 13 October 2022 (UTC)
- Yes, and please remember your signature. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 19:07, 13 October 2022 (UTC)
Fan is sus, he vented bros
One of the sentences in the second paragraph uses the word state twice.Fan26 (Talk) 15:48, 22 October 2022 (UTC)- Fixed. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 17:25, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
- Objection(s) overridden by EduCorps 18:10, 30 October 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
When introducing an acronym, you need to use the full wording and place the acronym in parentheses immediately after. So you need to have (IGBC) after the initial use of InterGalactic Banking Clan before you use it in isolation. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:41, 23 October 2022 (UTC)- Changed.
You should establish that the company went bankrupt as a result of embezzlement. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:41, 23 October 2022 (UTC)- Added in. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 17:16, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 06:43, 2 November 2022 (UTC)