Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ruu San

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Ruu San

Nominated by: Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 01:03, May 8, 2018 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Discovered in the ole' archive

~~I think you should link to Ruusan/Legends in the youmay.~~ Tommy Macaroni 15:59, May 10, 2018 (UTC)
- LOL, I thought I had. Thanks! Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 17:04, May 10, 2018 (UTC)

~~I think you can include some kind of time frame in the body.~~ Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:34, May 16, 2018 (UTC)
- Added. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 15:16, May 16, 2018 (UTC)
  - Saying the battle of Yavin might be a bit clearer since there were two death stars. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:03, May 16, 2018 (UTC)
    - Added. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 16:18, May 17, 2018 (UTC)
~~Does the article actually directly state she's a foe of Katarn? If so that should also be in the body.~~ Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:34, May 16, 2018 (UTC)
- Definitely! Thanks. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 15:16, May 16, 2018 (UTC)

~~Can we split up the second sentence please? It's a bit of a run on right now.~~ 1358 ^(Talk) 21:48, May 20, 2018 (UTC)
- Indeed - adjusted. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 15:50, May 23, 2018 (UTC)

~~Reference 3 is broken.~~
- Hmn. Fixed. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 18:52, June 1, 2018 (UTC)
~~Does the article specifically describe her as beautiful and deadly?~~
- Yes indeed. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 18:52, June 1, 2018 (UTC)
~~Can you throw in a date for the Battle of Yavin to help clarify a time period?~~ Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:24, May 27, 2018 (UTC)
- Very well, added. Thanks for looking it over. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 18:52, June 1, 2018 (UTC)