- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Ruati
- Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:22, April 26, 2014 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I miss these days
(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
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- Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 09:16, April 28, 2014 (UTC)
Corellian Premier
The Force will be with you always 20:28, April 28, 2014 (UTC)- 501st dogma(talk) 20:50, April 30, 2014 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 15:39, May 8, 2014 (UTC)
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Code-8
Why the bold in the quote?- It is that way in the comic.
- I don't think that means it has to be bolded here. It just looks a bit wrong to me.
- Per predence, yes it has to.
- I don't think that means it has to be bolded here. It just looks a bit wrong to me.
- It is that way in the comic.
Perhaps a mention of the Clone Wars after including the date.- As the death is not related to the war, I don't think a mention is necessary.
There's an unnecessary comma after mentioning Obi-Wan.- Done. Sofixit?
If gender and species are unknown Bts should reflect this.- Added.
If its unconfirmed that Ventress was the assassin perhaps add unidentified before the assassin mention. Article may be needed as well.- It is highly likely that the assassin is Ventress. An article or even the mentioning of "unidentified" is not really a good idea.
I'm confused how Kenobi deduces that Ventress was alive from the investigation, can you elaborate any further?Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 08:45, April 27, 2014 (UTC)- No, all we have is this line. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:30, April 27, 2014 (UTC)
- Then maybe we need a Bts note saying that its not fully stated who killed this person. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 22:12, April 27, 2014 (UTC)
- Better? Clone Commander Lee Talk 22:40, April 27, 2014 (UTC)
- Then maybe we need a Bts note saying that its not fully stated who killed this person. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 22:12, April 27, 2014 (UTC)
- No, all we have is this line. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:30, April 27, 2014 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
I think it would be better to keep the events presented in chronological order in the article. Therefore, mention that it was Ventress who killed him before you mention Obi-Wan's investigation.- It is not said that Ventress was responsible. Therefore the order is correct.
- Ah, okay. Maybe you should have a sentence in the BTS describing the situation.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:46, April 30, 2014 (UTC)
- Added a small mention. Clone Commander Lee Talk 22:50, April 30, 2014 (UTC)
- Ah, okay. Maybe you should have a sentence in the BTS describing the situation.--Exiled Jedi
- It is not said that Ventress was responsible. Therefore the order is correct.
From the Manual of Style: "However, the community has decided that quotes taken from comics should not mimic emphasized boldfaced wording. Instead, only italics are to be used for emphasis."- Interesting, better?
Could you provide more context on the Clone Wars and the Confederacy? Since Ventress was with the Confederacy, I believe that Ruati's death necessitates addition context.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:19, April 30, 2014 (UTC)
- As we don't know if Ruati was involved into the Clone Wars at all, I would prefer not to mention all this stuff, as it would be IMHO unnecessary context. However, I can remove "Confederate" if you like, so that this question would be resolved. Clone Commander Lee Talk 22:25, April 30, 2014 (UTC)
- Sure, just mentioning her as a Dark Jedi should be enough.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:46, April 30, 2014 (UTC)
- Killed the Confederate mention. Clone Commander Lee Talk 22:50, April 30, 2014 (UTC)
- Sure, just mentioning her as a Dark Jedi should be enough.--Exiled Jedi
- As we don't know if Ruati was involved into the Clone Wars at all, I would prefer not to mention all this stuff, as it would be IMHO unnecessary context. However, I can remove "Confederate" if you like, so that this question would be resolved. Clone Commander Lee Talk 22:25, April 30, 2014 (UTC)