Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Royal Command Bunker

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Royal Command Bunker

• Nominated by: Liverpool92 21:43, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 11:01, 15 December 2021 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 14:36, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
3. Please make sure to be ok with this copy-edit. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:16, 17 December 2021 (UTC)
4. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 00:55, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
5. OOM 224 17:13, 12 January 2022 (UTC)

Object

Braha'tok

• Excessive use of "after" at the beginning of sentences and clauses. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 21:53, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed.--Liverpool92 02:59, 14 December 2021 (UTC)

Lewis

• Ferren Barr isn't really a Jedi anymore at this point, so it should be former Jedi.
• The fact that Tarkin sent Vader to capture Lee-Char can be sourced to issue 17 as well, so the reference to issue 16 is unnecessary.
• Tarkin asking Vader to take Lee-Char to a window in the bunker so he can watch the Empire bombard the planet seems to be missing from the page. The window quote would likely fit as a quote for the page Lewisr (talk) 04:18, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed.--Liverpool92 10:24, 15 December 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:13, 12 January 2022 (UTC)