Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Rouge Beauty Company

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Rouge Beauty Company

  • Nominated by: AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 21:41, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 05:04, 14 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 134 words (0 introduction, 98 body, 36 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:02, 4 September 2023 (UTC)
  2. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:02, 6 September 2023 (UTC)
  3. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 21:17, 11 September 2023 (UTC)
  4. Rxxxxxxxxxx (talk) 00:23, 14 September 2023 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 05:02, 14 September 2023 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • I think you might be able to merge the last 2 sentences of the second paragraph by putting what Sean noted between 'While in the kitchen, he deduced' and 'that two-thirds of the Rouge Beauty Company products in Pomana's kitchen were fake, and instead made by the local business Opera Trade' Lewisr (talk) 23:49, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Is the company headquartered on Coruscant or were they just found there? Infobox and body don't seem to agree. They could still operate on Coruscant but not be headquartered there, if that makes sense? Lewisr (talk) 18:27, 2 September 2023 (UTC)
    • "To begin with, the golden pot on the far left is the bantha grease from Rouge Beauty Company on Coruscant." What would this signify in your opinion. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 17:16, 6 September 2023 (UTC)
      • That sounds more like it is based there Lewisr (talk) 17:18, 6 September 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 05:02, 14 September 2023 (UTC)