- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Rohan Wayside
- Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 16:46, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Swamp inhabitant
(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)
Support
- --Bonslywizard
(Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal!) 22:50, August 8, 2010 (UTC) - Well done. Menkooroo 10:15, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 22:30, August 17, 2010 (UTC)- --DarthRageLeave a message after the beep 23:25, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
- Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 15:03, September 6, 2010 (UTC)
Object
The article needs sourcing, a little more specific detailing (e.g: Bob was a human male...) and the picture is not a picture of him so it does not need to be there at all. And what species is he? Do you know?--Bonslywizard(Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal!) 17:41, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
- Article upgraded; picture removed; and no, the game does not specify what species he is. It doesn't need sourced if there is only one appearance. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 18:18, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
- Yo
Some context is needed on Gavyn Sykes ---even just adding "of the Naboo Resistance" after his name. Currently, the article only indirectly states that Sykes is part of that resistance.- Is "Houseboat clan" the actual name of the clan? If so, create an article on it and link to it, if not, listing this as his affiliation in the infobox might be preferable.
Can you mention in the bts that Battle for Naboo was his first appearance, and only appearance to date? Otherwise,good work. Menkooroo 01:18, August 17, 2010 (UTC)- Done and done. Thank you for checking out the article. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 09:49, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
The way it's currently written, it sounds like the trading village was a swamp, not just inside one. Please clarify.SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 05:43, August 17, 2010 (UTC)- Indeed.
- This doesn't mean that you can just take it out; it is still relevant info, it just needs to be portrayed correctly. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 10:34, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
- Re-added.
- This doesn't mean that you can just take it out; it is still relevant info, it just needs to be portrayed correctly. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 10:34, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
- Indeed.
- Cav:
In the article history, you note that the name is taken from IMDB. This needs to be detailed in the BTS, showing exactly how you came to this conclusion.- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 11:23, August 24, 2010 (UTC)
- Sorry about that; the name really does come from the game. I just needed a trip to IMDB to remind me of that fact, since I wrote the article without first going back and rechecking the game. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 14:04, August 24, 2010 (UTC)
Okay, but I've just created a red link for the voice actor, Doug Boyd. Can you please create the article, since CAs should have no redlinks.- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 09:42, September 3, 2010 (UTC)
- Sorry about that; the name really does come from the game. I just needed a trip to IMDB to remind me of that fact, since I wrote the article without first going back and rechecking the game. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 14:04, August 24, 2010 (UTC)
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