Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Rikel's wife

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Rikel's wife

• Nominated by: Trip391 (talk) 22:24, September 1, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: For Project Novels

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:14, September 6, 2013 (UTC)
2. Gone through and corrected some minor details. Feel free to check them. Commander Code-8 ^{You lost the game!} 09:04, September 10, 2013 (UTC)
3. Just so you know, the page numbers in the CSWE template are only used for references.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 18:39, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
4. 1358 ^(Talk) 10:21, September 21, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. CC-8
   • Context for Rikel in the first sentence.
     • Done
   • Briefly mention who the civil war was between pls.
     • Done
   • Can you get rid of the break that's after the second sentence.
     • Done
   • was arrested during a security sweep on Coruscant, and her dead body was later positively identified can you say directly that she died rather than jumping to her body being identified.
     • Done
   • Context for Centrepoint station
     • Done
       • Given that this is a small article I don't think a sentence that is their purely for context is appropriate, I'd get rid of it and just say that it could do a lot of damage
         • Done
   • Can you put NOTOC in.
     • Someone else took care of it
   • Mention that her species was not specified in the Bts. Commander Code-8 ^{You lost the game!} 09:20, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
     • Done Trip391 (talk) 20:22, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
       • It should probably be in a separate sentence rather than just being chucked on the end of that one. Commander Code-8 ^{You lost the game!} 07:34, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
         • Done Trip391 (talk) 19:47, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
2. Ayrehead
   • Could you split up the first sentence?
     • Done
   • Context for Coruscant. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:03, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
     • Done Trip391 (talk) 20:51, September 5, 2013 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi
   • Can you use Template:CSWECite for the sources section?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 14:28, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
     • Done Trip391 (talk) 19:30, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

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