Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Reggis Thine

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Reggis Thine

  • Nominated by: Trip391 (talk) 02:08, August 30, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)

Support

  1. 248 words, so be careful. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:56, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Exiled Jedi
  • Even though it only has one source, you still need to have a {{1stm}} tag.
    • Done
  • You need more information in the body to state that he lived during the Rebellion era. The Galactic Civil War started in 2 BBY, which was before the Rebellion era.
    • On second thought it doesn't mention anything other than the GCW, so I've removed Rebellion era
  • The article is currently at 205 words, so you should section the article.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 03:39, August 30, 2014 (UTC)
  • The introduction could use to have another sentence. A one sentence introduction is too short.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 15:19, September 2, 2014 (UTC)
    • Done, but now it's at 263 words, I believe. Trip391 (talk) 00:48, September 3, 2014 (UTC)
Lee's charge
  • Thine carried a blaster pistol, comlink, and datapad to carry out his work.: Meh, please reword.
    • Tweaked it
  • You need to link to his gender in the body.
    • Done
  • A lot of the stuff in the bio, should be in a P&T section. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:06, August 30, 2014 (UTC)
    • Done Trip391 (talk) 04:39, August 31, 2014 (UTC)
      • Good, but this part he did not care about the galactic conflict as long as he could patrol the station in peace also should be mentioned in the P&T somehow. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:11, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

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