Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Red (Band Light)

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Nominated by: Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 00:31, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
Nomination comments:And next on Blood, Gore, and Other Unfortunate Mishaps:Red, the man whose name matches his looks.

Support

Just a few minor problems that I fixed, good work.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:12, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

~~I need to pay better attention.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:23, August 17, 2011 (UTC)~~

Object

~~Could you mention that the corridor he was killed in was near life support?~~--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:23, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
- Done. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 14:36, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
~~See my objection on the captain's nomination.~~--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 15:57, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
- Done. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 19:06, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
~~Does it say in the databank that he was eviscerated? Being impaled by a pipe doesn't remove your entrails unless canon says so.~~ NaruHina ^Talk 23:04, October 1, 2011 (UTC)
- Actually, it does say that he was eviscerated.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 00:30, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Cav
- ~~Again, establish the actual cause of death before the assumption.~~ - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:06, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
  - And done.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 13:27, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
    - The method of death should be described when it is noted the Terror Trooper kills him. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:32, October 27, 2011 (UTC)
      - Added.
- ~~Also, who speculated that the death was an accident? The Captain? if so, it should be stated and linked to the appropriate article.~~ - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:32, October 27, 2011 (UTC)
  - Done.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:49, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

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