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Raxulon main port
- Nominated by: DwartiiDelver (talk) 02:10, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
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Nice to see a Dark Disciple nom OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 19:58, 3 July 2021 (UTC)- Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:55, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
- JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 16:24, 11 July 2021 (UTC) - VergenceScatter (talk) 16:38, 11 July 2021 (UTC)
- IFYLOFD (Talk) 16:44, 11 July 2021 (UTC)
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OOM
A little context can be given as to why Ventress and Vos chose not to land at the main portOOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 14:11, 3 July 2021 (UTC)- So the book doesn't really say why they didn't land there, however I've reworded that sentence as "opted" may not have been the right word—it's really just stated in the prose that they did not land at the main port. A small part of me is starting to wonder if that sentence is even necessary, though, since it's not clear the characters themselves decided not to land there. DwartiiDelver (talk) 16:55, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- If the novel went out of its way to mention it, then it's fair for us to document it specifically. I think it's obvious that two assassins would want to operate in secrecy, so you could mention that Ventress and Vos went to Raxus in order to assassinate Dooku. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 18:02, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- Added. DwartiiDelver (talk) 18:39, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- If the novel went out of its way to mention it, then it's fair for us to document it specifically. I think it's obvious that two assassins would want to operate in secrecy, so you could mention that Ventress and Vos went to Raxus in order to assassinate Dooku. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 18:02, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
- So the book doesn't really say why they didn't land there, however I've reworded that sentence as "opted" may not have been the right word—it's really just stated in the prose that they did not land at the main port. A small part of me is starting to wonder if that sentence is even necessary, though, since it's not clear the characters themselves decided not to land there. DwartiiDelver (talk) 16:55, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
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Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:58, 11 July 2021 (UTC)