Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ram

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Ram

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:22, March 10, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I hate all these one-mention-characters.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. But your articles are so fun to read Lee! Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:10, March 11, 2014 (UTC)
2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:01, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
3. Manoof (talk) 10:57, March 18, 2014 (UTC)
4. 501st dogma^(talk) 01:31, March 25, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Ayrehead

• If you're going to split the article to have equipment and P&T, you should also have and intro and biography section. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:15, March 13, 2014 (UTC)
  • Adressed. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:13, March 13, 2014 (UTC)
• You need to fix the several redirects. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:15, March 13, 2014 (UTC)
  • Done. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:13, March 13, 2014 (UTC)
    • Both were still redirects, but I fixed them for you. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:39, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
• When you say they took over the barracks it isn't clear they did so in a hostile way, they could of just been given command of it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:15, March 13, 2014 (UTC)
  • We don't know if the did it in a hostile way, therefore I left it ambiguous.
    • I still think the sentence needs rewording somehow. It isn't clear that them taking over the building was an issue till the next sentence, as far as the sentence implies they might have been ordered to take command of it or something. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:39, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
      • Better? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 15:48, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
• The first two objections apply to several more of your noms below. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:16, March 13, 2014 (UTC)
  • Adressed. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:19, March 13, 2014 (UTC)

Manoof

• You mention the armor was colored, do we know what color? If not it might be better to remove the mention of color... Manoof (talk) 02:38, March 17, 2014 (UTC)
  • No, just that Skirate recognized them due to their armor coloring. It's quite something that would normally belong to an "Equipment" section and I would say it is worth to keep. However, I will remove it if you say so. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:38, March 17, 2014 (UTC)
    • In that case i would recommend it be reworded to something like "In combat, he used a Katarn-class armor issued to clone commandos with custom colours" or something, just to clarify the armor wasnt issued colored :) Manoof (talk) 09:40, March 18, 2014 (UTC)
      • Reworded all of them. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:48, March 18, 2014 (UTC)
        • great! Manoof (talk) 10:57, March 18, 2014 (UTC)

SE

• Can you reword the last sentence a bit? To me, it sounds like the armor was issued to clone commandos who had customized colors. Supreme Emperor (talk) 01:27, March 20, 2014 (UTC)
  • Better? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:55, March 20, 2014 (UTC)
• Can you add the release months to the bts? Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:40, March 24, 2014 (UTC)
  • Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:29, March 24, 2014 (UTC)

501

• You need to mention his species in the body. 501st dogma^(talk) 21:55, March 24, 2014 (UTC)
  • Done. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:01, March 24, 2014 (UTC)

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