Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Raid on the Fondor Shipyards

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Raid on the Fondor Shipyards

• Nominated by: Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 20:15, May 27, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: An early raid

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:37, May 27, 2014 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 21:24, May 29, 2014 (UTC)
3. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 22:16, May 30, 2014 (UTC)
4. Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:36, June 2, 2014 (UTC)
5. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:58, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Object

• One thing: Can you find a way to merge the last sentence? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 20:24, May 27, 2014 (UTC)
  • Oh sure. Thanks. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:48, May 27, 2014 (UTC)

Code-8

• You need to mention the Civil war in the body. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 08:43, May 29, 2014 (UTC)
  • Finito. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 18:16, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

501st

• As you are classifying the Shipyards as Imperial, than the Empire should be added to the combatants field in the infobox. The way the article is currently, it sounds like the Alliance is assaulting the Imperial shipyard.
  • Well, the raid could easily be against the Shipyard Authority, so I removed the Imp mention for now until we can work this out. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 18:16, May 29, 2014 (UTC)
• It also would be nice if you could add mention of the assault on Cardooine in the body, as it seems to be related to the raid itself.
  • Uh, sure. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 18:16, May 29, 2014 (UTC)
• A Youmay would be good, linking to Battle of Fondor (disambiguation). 501st dogma^(talk) 16:17, May 29, 2014 (UTC)
  • Added. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 18:16, May 29, 2014 (UTC)
• On second thought, do you think that Raid on the Fondor Shipyards would be a more appropriate title? 501st dogma^(talk) 16:20, May 29, 2014 (UTC)
  • Meh, why not. Moved. Thanks for the lookover. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 18:16, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

1. No, it does not specifically state that it was against the Empire. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 20:15, May 27, 2014 (UTC)