Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ragon's sister

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Ragon's sister

• Nominated by: LucaRoR ^(Talk) 17:52, 28 February 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Don't ask me why, but I've got a bad feeling about this :P
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Support

1. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:04, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
2. Embrace the CAN path! :P Samonic (Ah, yes. The negotiator.) 18:03, 3 March 2022 (UTC)
3. OOM 224 17:15, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
4. Lewisr (talk) 17:24, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
5. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 16:16, 11 March 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonic has a bad feeling

• Maybe some context of the mention? I mean, some context of the situation she was mentioned in. Samonic (Ah, yes. The negotiator.) 18:00, 28 February 2022 (UTC)
  • "this misunderstanding was told to some fellow individuals by Ragon in a cantina," I'd say this is enough context. Giving additional details would only shift the reader's attention away from the article's subject. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:02, 28 February 2022 (UTC)
    • Hmm. I understand. Thank you.

Lewisr

• Shouldn't the laughter that follows after Ragon mentions about the stuff with his sister be mentioned also? It seems like he is telling it as part of some sort of joke/funny story Lewisr (talk) 18:17, 28 February 2022 (UTC)
  • Better? LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:21, 28 February 2022 (UTC)

Fan

• Wording: ", he told about this misunderstanding to some fellow individuals, causing their laughter.["
  • "he told about this" --> "he described the"
  • "fellow" --> "other"
  • "their laughter" --> "them to laugh" Fan26 (Talk) 19:30, 4 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Done, thank you! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:22, 5 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 19:50, 13 March 2022 (UTC)