Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Rafe's Gambit

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Rafe's Gambit

Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:28, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
Nomination comments:My first ship nom as part of my Dark Times run through

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

501st dogma^(talk) 12:04, June 9, 2013 (UTC)
- Princess GLG 00:21, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 15:20, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
<-Omicron^{(Leave a message at the BEEP!)} 19:09, June 24, 2013 (UTC)

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Princess
- ~~Doesn't it need to be mentioned that it is a starship in the body? (Perhaps even add a Description section, although that might be unnecessary.)~~ - Princess GLG 23:43, June 10, 2013 (UTC)
  - Added. A description sentence would just read "The Rath's Gambit was a starship" I can add it if you want but yeah seems unneeded. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:47, June 11, 2013 (UTC)
- ~~Can you cut down on the whilsts?~~ - Princess GLG 21:16, June 11, 2013 (UTC)
  - Cut down 3 to 1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:23, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
- "During the wait for clearance for departure, the crew of the ship discovered that Imperial stormtroopers had begun searching each ship in the port, a fact they contacted the crew of the Maka-Eekai L4000 transport the Uhumele by comm." I think there is a word missing in there after the comma.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:04, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
  - Think I fixed it although I'm not 100% sure if a comma is the correct punctuation. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:19, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
    - Looks fine to me.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 15:20, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
Omi
- I think the last paragraph of the history section should be rephrased. The whole crew didn't steal the V-wing, it was Dass on his own. <-Omicron^{(Leave a message at the BEEP!)} 00:25, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
  - Changed it round is that better? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:58, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
    - Looks good to me. <-Omicron^{(Leave a message at the BEEP!)} 19:09, June 24, 2013 (UTC)

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