Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Qonto (second nomination)

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Qonto

Nominated by: Eyrezer (talk) 07:11, September 12, 2015 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Have now addressed all the points that led to it previously losing status: Wookieepedia:EC/Qonto.

I'm not going to actually object to this due to its nitpickyness, but you are not sourcing Qonto's sentience to the same thing in the infobox and the body. It might be desirable to change it to the same source. 501st dogma^(talk) 22:24, September 13, 2015 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi (talk) 22:40, September 15, 2015 (UTC)
Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 16:11, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

~~As the article is at 214 words, you will need to add an introduction and section the article.~~--Exiled Jedi (talk) 14:02, September 12, 2015 (UTC)
- Removed the superfluous line in the BTS already covered by the footnote, based on precedent of Gaxxon brain-slug. This means it is below 200 words. -Eyrezer (talk) 15:03, September 12, 2015 (UTC)
"Although generally not known for their perception, some exceptional Qonto had senses considerably sharper than the Human standard." All we know is that one Qonto had senses considerably sharper than the Human standard. I'm also not sure where how you are getting that her senses were considerably sharper than the Human standard. If it is from the stats, you need to give some indication of where you are getting the Human standard from in a reference.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 23:27, September 14, 2015 (UTC)
- No that fact is surprisingly actually from the CSWE, not the RPG book itself. The CSWE makes the statement apply to the entire species, and in doing so goes beyond what the original source had said about the Qonto. It surprised me, too. --Eyrezer (talk) 16:07, September 15, 2015 (UTC)