- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Project X271
- Nominated by: Darth Morrt 15:00, November 24, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Bolvan-related nomination.
(1 ECs/2 Users/3 Total)
Support
- Menkooroo 04:58, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
Sorry; forgot about this one. ~ SavageBob 16:18, January 27, 2011 (UTC)- Hanzo Hasashi 21:59, January 27, 2011 (UTC)
Object
Does the source actually say that it's stored aboard Vader's Star Destroyer? The leading quote makes it sound like they'd actually have to retrieve it from the Outer Rim.Menkooroo 15:24, January 1, 2011 (UTC)- No it doesn't say that it was stored. In the Fact Files, Bolvan suggested "that the planet should be utterly cleansed using experimental ordinance [sic] from Project X271". The sentences about deployable ordnance and storing it on the Destroyer is actually conjectural. They didn't have much time, and Bolvan wanted to use this weapon, so I think the weapon was deployable and they have it at hand. Darth Morrt 16:48, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
- We can't put speculation into articles. Anything conjectural has gotta go. Menkooroo 17:37, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
- Done. Darth Morrt 17:52, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
- We can't put speculation into articles. Anything conjectural has gotta go. Menkooroo 17:37, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
- No it doesn't say that it was stored. In the Fact Files, Bolvan suggested "that the planet should be utterly cleansed using experimental ordinance [sic] from Project X271". The sentences about deployable ordnance and storing it on the Destroyer is actually conjectural. They didn't have much time, and Bolvan wanted to use this weapon, so I think the weapon was deployable and they have it at hand. Darth Morrt 16:48, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
- Prepare to be savaged...
Is there a reason to keep the "somewhere" in the first sentence? Seems it'd read fine without it, and "somewhere in the Outer Rim" is kind of like using "unidentified" in an article, IMO.- Cut. Darth Morrt 00:14, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
Can you find some synonyms or alternative wording that avoids using the words "weapon," "development," and "project" so much? ~ SavageBob 15:55, January 19, 2011 (UTC)- Reworded. Darth Morrt 00:14, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
- I might be wrong, but perhaps instead of [[Galactic Empire/Legends|First Galactic Empire]], it could instead just be First [[Galactic Empire/Legends|Galactic Empire]]. Feel free to change back if it was better the other way. And also I removed the two links to Bombardment of Falleen in the same paragraph. Otherwise, support and good job. Hanzo Hasashi 21:59, January 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review and for your edits. Darth Morrt 02:52, January 28, 2011 (UTC)