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Project Supercharger

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I bet this had nothing to do with the Death Star. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 05:54, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
OOM 224 19:18, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:32, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:37, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

~~I think it's worth mentioning that the ship here was manufactured by CEC~~ OOM 224 16:27, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
- How's that? IIRC, Rise of the Separatists states that the Consular-class was manufactured by CEC, but I can't check since my sources are at home. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 13:44, 1 September 2021 (UTC)

"which resulted in modifications to Corellian Engineering Corporation–manufactured Judicial Consular-class space cruisers into combat frigates for the Republic Navy" -- the last bit, starting from "into combat frigates", doesn't make sense to me. They "resulted in modifications into frigates"? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:25, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
- What doesn't make sense? It essentially says "Project Supercharger created the package for the Charger c70 retrofit, which resulted in modifications to Consular-class cruisers to be used as combat frigates in the Republic Navy." Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 04:11, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
  - The issue is at the end: "space cruisers into combat frigates" feels like it's missing a word or two. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:53, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
    - I reworded it a bit. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 01:41, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

~~Can you clarify what "the package" and the Charger retrofit is? You may need to split that sentence up. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:13, 2 September 2021 (UTC)~~
- They do not specify what the package is exactly. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 13:36, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
  - Ok I had a bit of a look and idenfified the charger retrofit it the cruiser mentioned later. I made a small edit, can you look it over and make sure its still true to the source? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:08, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
    - That's fine. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 01:41, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

I will address any and all possible objections when I return from vacation in 7-8 days. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 16:44, 27 August 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:15, 7 September 2021 (UTC)