Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Panna cake

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Panna cake

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:47, January 10, 2015 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: The best of the Dex's puns

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 00:53, January 14, 2015 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 13:58, January 14, 2015 (UTC)
3. Manoof (talk) 02:26, January 28, 2015 (UTC)
4. I didn't grab the "Panaka" pun until I saw it mentioned elsewhere. ^Jorrel_Fraajic 23:06, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Object

501st

• Are Robo-griddle, Carbosyrup and Bantha butter supposed to be capitalized? The quote doesn't have them this way 501st dogma^(talk)
  • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:05, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• Preliminary objection: Shouldn't this be at the singular title of Panna cake?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 01:04, January 14, 2015 (UTC)
  • Moved. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:05, January 14, 2015 (UTC)
• I'm not seeing where the blog says that "Panna cake" is a pun based off Panaka. I just see it mentioned as a pun.
  • True, but surely using common sense we can conclude that's what it is? I can remove it if you want but it seems silly. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:58, January 19, 2015 (UTC)
    • Actually immediately after writing this I thought of another pun it might be. My bad, removed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:00, January 19, 2015 (UTC)
• From the source, I don't think robo-griddle should be capitalized. You have it both capitalized and uncapitalized.
  • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:58, January 19, 2015 (UTC)
• Please provide an additional source for the name of the moon.
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:58, January 19, 2015 (UTC)
• The source mentions that three of the hotcakes were served in a meal at Dex's.
  • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:58, January 19, 2015 (UTC)
• The price for the meal also included a breakfast side dish.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 19:54, January 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:58, January 19, 2015 (UTC)
• Could you add a quote from the blog to the BTS section?
  • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:01, January 20, 2015 (UTC)
• From what I was told during my Dex's GANs, Dining at Dex's should be listed as an appearance, although everything in it is still only mentioned. Please go through your articles and fix this.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:34, January 20, 2015 (UTC)
  • Done here. Will fix the remaining articles later when I return from uni. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:01, January 20, 2015 (UTC)
• As the author's blog is not an official source, it would be more appropriate in an External links section.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 21:42, January 20, 2015 (UTC)
  • Changed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:38, January 22, 2015 (UTC)
• After I finished tweaking the article, the word count came to 202. From my experience writing Dining at Dex's articles, sectioning the article may or may not bring it over the word count. In any event, please write an intro and section the article to see where the word count falls.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 18:04, February 2, 2015 (UTC)
  • Split and now at 236. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:36, February 3, 2015 (UTC)
• I disagree with how the information is split between the description and history section. The description section should detail the food, the toppings that were served with it, and what species could eat it. The history section should include information related to where the dish was served, along with how it was served at different locations and the prices. Some information might need to be in both sections, like what toppings were used. In the description section, you are probably fine just listing the toppings, while in the history section you need to mention which toppings come with the different prices.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 19:12, February 11, 2015 (UTC)
  • Yeah I see what you mean. Changed now, I think it's ok? 236 words. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:25, February 11, 2015 (UTC)
• You can't just say that the cakes were delicious; you also need to say the person who found them to be delicious.
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:18, February 16, 2015 (UTC)
• You should also mention that Jettster served the cakes with carbosyrup and bantha butter in the history section as this is not clearly stated anywhere else.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 15:51, February 16, 2015 (UTC)
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:18, February 16, 2015 (UTC)
• This is now at 257 words, so this should go to the GAN page.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:53, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

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