Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Palmer

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Palmer

• Nominated by:Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 19:59, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Battle for Naboo's red shirt

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)

Support

1. Fixed a number of links, and removed the redundant refs. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 01:41, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. Redshirt poking!
   • No refs?
     • Honestly, I didn't source it becasue of just one appearance. Someone else added CSWE. For all I know, it refers to Bravo Squadron. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 11:36, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
       • If you want to find out whether something is in the CSWE, all you have to do is ask here.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:13, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
         • huh, never knew that. Request pending.
         • Fully sourced Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 14:13, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
   • Could you add the fact that she was female to the paragraph?
     • Yep.
   • Interesting.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:35, July 20, 2010 (UTC)
   • Just one more thing, since she seems to be allied with the Naboo, rather than the GR, you might want to change this to a normal character infobox. Otherwise, good job!--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:13, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
     • Infobox changed. Thanks for the advice.Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 14:13, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
2. Soresu
   • That born field isn't necessary. If you can't be more specific than "before she died", then it's better to just leave it out.
   • Unsourced infobox items.
   • Referencing always comes after punctuation.
   • If you can prove she's Human, then it needs to be mentioned in places other than the infobox.
   • Double-check for underlinking and redirect linking.
   • Her ability to pilot the Speeder and Starfighter should be in the P&T.
   • Provide some sort of date at the beginning of the Bio. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 10:47, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
     • Article updated. Thanks for checking it out. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 16:28, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
3. A few more from Sore
   • The intro should never have information that is mentioned nowhere else. That's why it doesn't need referencing. Also, it should also be a more complete summary of her life, including her involvement in the battle and her death. So yeah, include the intro stuff in the bio, and then expand the intro. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 10:50, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
   • There is no need to put two of the same reference next to each other, as it is redundant. The sentences ending in "rescue by her comrades." and "of the capital city Theed." could have their refs removed.
   • Nice work; it's getting there. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 10:50, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
     • Oh and I just realised that this is actually 260-something words (even longer after these objections are addressed), meaning that it should by all rights be nominated at WP:GAN rather than here. I recommend you take it over there. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 10:55, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

• Note to ECs: As stated above, the article exceeds 250 words and is therefore not eligible for CAN status. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 05:37, July 31, 2010 (UTC)