Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ossluk Noslee

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Ossluk Noslee

• Nominated by: Tm_T ^(Talk) 23:01, October 9, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: "The Gand will tell you. But please tell no one." Whopsie?

(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. NAYAYEN 14:55, October 10, 2010 (UTC)
2. I'm not going to tell you my name, which is definately NOT Bob. Muhahahahahaha!!!--Bonslywizard^{(Send a transmission)} 00:22, October 12, 2010 (UTC)
3. I'd like to see more of these. Jurgan Kalta, perhaps?—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:53, October 13, 2010 (UTC)
4. 1358 ^(Talk) 20:10, October 16, 2010 (UTC)
5. Just did this quest in game with the TSLRCM. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 14:15, October 17, 2010 (UTC)
6. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 01:23, October 19, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. "...have possibly been felled into the possession of..." Umm, what? :P NAYAYEN 23:08, October 9, 2010 (UTC)
   • Better now? --Tm_T ^(Talk) 23:18, October 9, 2010 (UTC)
     • The sentence makes sense now, although I now notice the speculation (eg. possibly been acquired) which shouldn't be there. NAYAYEN 23:26, October 9, 2010 (UTC)
       • Indeed, speculation should be gone now. (: --Tm_T ^(Talk) 13:51, October 10, 2010 (UTC)
2. The Wizard did it
   • As mentioned above, nothing should "possibly" have happened or not happened.
   • "...acquired by the former Jedi Knight the Jedi Exile." Should be re-worded...the sentence reads slightly awkwardly.
   • There are various english errors on the page also. I've fixed them, but it would be best to read it over and make sure verything is fine.
   • --Bonslywizard^{(Send a transmission)} 00:42, October 10, 2010 (UTC)
     • Ok now? --Tm_T ^(Talk) 13:51, October 10, 2010 (UTC)
       • Yup. --Bonslywizard^{(Send a transmission)} 00:22, October 12, 2010 (UTC)
3. Soresu
   • There is no intro, so remove the TOC.
     • Done.
   • If he's cut content, then shouldn't he be labelled as such?
     • He is still mentioned in the game via his gloves.
       • Was the info in the bio all from the item description? SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 22:58, October 15, 2010 (UTC)
         • Yes, or other way, no cut content included in the bio. (: --Tm_T ^(Talk) 18:44, October 16, 2010 (UTC)
   • Considering that most Gand never earned a name of their own Could this be explained? For example In Gand culture, ... SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 03:54, October 14, 2010 (UTC)
     • Done by simple mention, sufficient? (: --Tm_T ^(Talk) 12:19, October 14, 2010 (UTC)
4. Considering Sullustan is a species, you need to modify the Bts quote attribution to have "a Sullustan" or something like that. 1358 ^(Talk) 18:32, October 16, 2010 (UTC)
   • Timing++ (: --Tm_T ^(Talk) 18:44, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

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