Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Omo Bouri

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Omo Bouri

Nominated by: Chipchip88 (talk) 21:57, 25 October 2024 (UTC)
Nomination comments:
Date Archived: 06:48, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
Final word count: 97 words (0 introduction, 38 body, 59 behind the scenes)
Word count at nomination time: 75 words (0 introduction, 22 body, 53 behind the scenes)
WookieeProject (optional): WP:SWCT

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~~I think it'd be worth giving a date by when Omo trained Saesee Tiin, since we know Saesee was on the Council in 40 BBY, it would have to been by that time~~ Lewisr (talk) 22:08, 25 October 2024 (UTC)
- Added date Chipchip88 (talk) 22:26, 25 October 2024 (UTC)
~~I did some looking into the 1stm in Legends, and it appears to actually be The New Essential Guide to Characters so that should be updated here~~ Lewisr (talk) 01:56, 26 October 2024 (UTC)
~~I think you should more directly say that Saesee was Omo's apprentice, since just training someone doesn't by itself make them a Master~~ Lewisr (talk) 01:56, 26 October 2024 (UTC)
- Addressed Chipchip88 (talk) 15:07, 26 October 2024 (UTC)

When talking about the timeframe, I think it should be changed to say that Bouri took Tiin as their Padawan and finished their training by that date. I also think it would be good to mention that Tiin later became a Jedi Master after his time under Bouri. So something like: "Bouri trained the Iktotchi Saesee Tiin as their Padawan, and by 40 BBY, Bouri had completed Tiin's training, with his former apprentice becoming a Jedi Master." Wok142 (talk) 22:10, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
- Addressed Chipchip88 (talk) 22:25, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 06:46, 29 October 2024 (UTC)