Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Old One-Eye

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Old One-Eye

• Nominated by: Trip391 (talk) 01:23, April 12, 2015 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/0 Users/1 Total)

Support

1. 501st dogma^(talk) 02:28, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Object

501st

• Context on Coruscant.
  • Added
• We need a timeframe in the body to put it in the Rise of the Empire era. Stating that the rancor lived at the time of the Clone Wars should suffice.
  • Done
    • Context on the Clone Wars would be ideal, especially as you mentioned the GR and the Seppies.
      • Done
        • It should say it was fought between the GR and the Separatists. 501st dogma^(talk) 14:50, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
          • Done Trip391 (talk) 04:05, April 20, 2015 (UTC)
• Context on Rex.
  • Done
• Skin color needs to be mentioned in the body.
  • Done
• From the name and the scar covering the eye in the image, it's alright to say that he only has one eye. This should be mentioned in the body. 501st dogma^(talk) 23:30, April 14, 2015 (UTC)
  • Mentioned
• Also, the odds on him should be mentioned in the body. 501st dogma^(talk) 23:30, April 14, 2015 (UTC)
  • Done Trip391 (talk) 02:53, April 15, 2015 (UTC)
• "Skywalker joined the fight and was able to calm the rancors enough for them to be mounted..." Erm, did they ride them into the sunset or something?
  • They only moved a few feet, but on closer inspection, Anakin does tell Ahsoka to "mount up, [they] still have a Separatist to catch", so I've added that Trip391 (talk) 00:39, April 18, 2015 (UTC)
• Also, I'm not sure if this is correct, but you might want to add a nickname template. "Old-One Eye" seems like a stage name given to the rancor. The call is up to you though. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:02, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• Isn't the rancor wearing some kind of armor?
  • I figured it was simply a darker shade of hide/skin. in the comic both Anakin and Ahsoka slashed it with their lightsabers, and Anakin said "There hides are too strong - lightsabers are having no effect!" I've added a blurb about this as well.
• Does the comic/magazine mention the release month?
  • The cover says September 2010
• The article is at 200 words and needs to be sectioned.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 01:00, May 3, 2015 (UTC)
  • I've sectioned it, and now it is too large to be a CAN. Can you archive this and I'll GAN it? Trip391 (talk) 02:29, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

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