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Oga's Obsession
- Nominated by: Immi Thrax
(talk) 17:57, 30 August 2021 (UTC) - Nomination comments: The snack for everyone who considered eating a science experiment?
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Support
- Dentface (talk) 04:56, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
- Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 20:42, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
- D MCCG
(chat) 21:04, 6 September 2021 (UTC) 
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:11, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 13:08, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
Object
Braha'tok's enthusiasm
"…she slurped her snack from a glass dish and splattered Moradi's face…" Since you're going into a rolling into a new paragraph and context, you should specify that it's a "dish of Oga's Obsession".Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 17:21, 31 August 2021 (UTC)- Revised, slurpily. Immi Thrax (talk) 17:30, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
- Revised, slurpily. Immi Thrax
Fan
I think the fact that Blutopians could consume it should be made explicit in the article body, rather than having it implicit by ID'ing Oga as a Blutopian.Fan26 (Talk) 20:27, 6 September 2021 (UTC)- Changed that and made some other sentence adjustments. Immi Thrax (talk) 21:03, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
- Changed that and made some other sentence adjustments. Immi Thrax
Macaroni's Mania
I think you've got the wrong source listed in the date note.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:18, 7 September 2021 (UTC)- I sure did! Copy-paste fail. Immi Thrax (talk) 01:51, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
- I sure did! Copy-paste fail. Immi Thrax
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 13:10, 10 September 2021 (UTC)