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Nubussian cocoa
- Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:04, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: this cocoa is presumably bussin
- Date Archived: 02:47, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 92 words (0 introduction, 63 body, 29 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR, WP:NOVELS
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Support
Lewisr (talk) 19:20, 10 August 2023 (UTC)-
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:50, 11 August 2023 (UTC) 
—spookywillowwtalk 02:46, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
Object
Lew
I think it's a bit relevant to include something as to why Matty recalled the Nubussian cocoa instances- Added.
The book establishes that Matty had been stationed on Jedha with Leebon since she had been taken on as her Padawan, so adding Jedha as a location and in the body I think is appropriateLewisr (talk) 15:15, 10 August 2023 (UTC)- Added.
Also including Matty's species I think is worthwhile, since you also include Leebon'sLewisr (talk) 15:16, 10 August 2023 (UTC)- Idk why I put Leebon's in the first place but yeah, added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:03, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
Anil
Is it fair add Twi'lek to the "Edible by" field in the infobox, since the cocoa was brewed for a member of that species?- Yeah, added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:39, 11 August 2023 (UTC)
I'm not really sure about asssuming that Nubussian cocoa is a type of hot chocolate, especially since the real-life hot cocoa and chocolate are not exactly the same thing. Even if we do assume that, it seems weird to only add the category and not mention Hot chocolate in the body. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:18, 11 August 2023 (UTC)
- Removed. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:39, 11 August 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 02:46, 12 August 2023 (UTC)