Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Nix

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Nix

• Nominated by: Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 16:39, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:Different Nix than my other CAnom.

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)

Support

1. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 19:25, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
2. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 22:01, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Object

1. Exiled Jedi
   • Just a quick question: Was it not confirmed that he was killed by Terror Troopers?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:28, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
     • Yup. Fixed. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 14:32, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
   • See my objection on the captain's nom.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 15:59, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
     • Phew, I think I got them all. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 19:08, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

1. Cav
   • The final two sentences in the bio need to be rewritten to explain exactly what happened in the correct order. The fact that a terror trooper killed him should be stated, then the fact that he was discovered outside an airlock and his death was thought to be an accident. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:41, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
     • Fixed.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 13:21, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
   • Just noticed that you don't actually mention that Nix went aboard the transport at all. That should be mentioned before his death to establish the context. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:19, October 27, 2011 (UTC)
     • Fixed.
   • Also, who speculated that the death was an accident? The Captain? if so, it should be stated and linked to the appropriate article. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:30, October 27, 2011 (UTC)
     • Added.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:45, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

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