Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ni-Cada

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Ni-Cada

• Nominated by: Cumulonimbus Cloud ^{(Meeting Room)} 17:56, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: First CAN

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1. 501st
   • Him being Cerean needs to be in the body.
     • Done.
   • You say: "thirty five years before the Clone Wars". You should link that to the correct date of 57 BBY.
     • Done.
   • You need to say before they met Plagueis they were bargaining with a Barabel for a water skimmer.
     • Done.
   • Maybe expand the attack part: mention they tracked him with the skimmer, and fought near the water.
     • Done.
   • You should say they met Plagueis while bearing flagons of liquid from an eatery.
     • Done.
   • The book describes him as "rangy", this needs to be added.
     • Done.
       • I moved it to the P&T section, as that is where it should be.
   • I think there is enough info to add a Personality and traits section, with things such as Cada's more drawn back attitude, as he withheld the reason of their visit to Abraxin, though Bukk told the Munn anyway.
     • Done. Cumulonimbus Cloud ^{(Meeting Room)} 02:06, June 19, 2012 (UTC)
       • Remember, do not link to something you have all ready linked to in the body in the P&T. I see quite a few there.
         • Done.Cumulonimbus Cloud ^{(Meeting Room)} 20:11, June 19, 2012 (UTC)
   • Thats all for now. I think there is enough info to bring this to GAN, as well as Lo Bukk. Good work. 501st dogma^(talk) 20:57, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
     • Do you think the artical needs to be put up on the GAN page now? Or can it stay?
       • I'll finish my review here, then archive as a failed CAN and then you can take it to the GAN.
   • You're refing is off in the main body of the article. We don't use {{Ref|<ref name="Darth P" />}}, but <ref name="Darth P" />.
     • Done.
   • I'll look it over once more before I move it to GAN. 501st dogma^(talk) 13:46, June 19, 2012 (UTC)
   • Add that Ni-Cada killed Lare.501st dogma^(talk) 13:57, June 19, 2012 (UTC)
     • Done.Cumulonimbus Cloud ^{(Meeting Room)} 20:11, June 19, 2012 (UTC)
   • Add quotes for Bio and P&T. 501st dogma^(talk) 23:13, June 19, 2012 (UTC)
     • Done. Cumulonimbus Cloud ^{(ℳeeting ℛoom)} 20:59, June 20, 2012 (UTC)
       • How bout a quote in which Ni-Cada speaks instead?
         • Also, don't use the dialogue template as the quotes only two lines. 501st dogma^(talk) 21:43, June 20, 2012 (UTC)
           • Done. Cumulonimbus Cloud ^{(ℳeeting ℛoom)} 22:28, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

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