Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Namana cream pie

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Namana cream pie

• Nominated by: Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 18:43, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Here comes a pie, Naru.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Comedy. How quaint. ;) NaruHina ^Talk 22:14, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
2. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 19:08, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
3. ~Savage 16:21, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
4. Menkooroo 00:46, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Object

1. The first sentence is a run-on. NaruHina ^Talk 19:14, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
   • Better?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 20:18, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
2. Jangeth
   • Check your grammar JangFett ^(Talk) 19:24, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
     • Better?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 20:16, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

• Does anyone think I need to elaborate about the Bakurans and the Namana plant?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 18:43, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
  • You should make reference to it as "native to the planet of Bakura" or something to that effect. As for the plant, even though it's not explicitly established that it was made from that plant, the use of the name combined with it being native to Bakura would make a reference to the trees appropriate. NaruHina ^Talk 19:14, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
    • I added a reference to Bakura, how would you suggest I reference the tree?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 20:16, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
      • "Namana cream pie was a type of pie from the planet Bakura, home of the Namana tree, that was served..." would probably work. NaruHina ^Talk 20:25, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
        • Done.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 20:42, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
• Remember to source the word "before" to Dining at Dex's. NaruHina ^Talk 19:14, July 5, 2011 (UTC)