Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Nafjan T'dell

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Nafjan T'dell

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:41, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: FloydProject: Lost Tribe moves to the CAN.

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. Good, but the last sentence is very similiar to the one in his wife's article. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:06, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
  2. The ebooks might as well be called Star Wars: Gilligan's Planet. Corellian PremierRobotechAll along the watchtower 16:44, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 01:52, May 6, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Gal-icon OLIOSTER (talk) 17:00, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Object

  1. Princes kept the view
  2. Well, maybe this is just me nitpicking but bear with me:
  3. He's categorized as a Sith but not wholly identified as as Sith in the bio, just that he served on a Sith starship. Is that enough to classify him as one?
    • Well, there's no other real category for him.
  4. Please remove the table of contents.
    • Done.
  5. Looks really good. Corellian PremierRobotechAll along the watchtower 03:03, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
  6. Exiled Jedi
    • "Omen crewmembers were brought to civilization where they took their place as rulers of the world" I'm a little confused here, how were they brought to civilization?
      • I didn't want to go too far off topic, so it's been changed to "made their way to civilization".
    • Could you vary the wording somewhat from the Kanika T'dell article?--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 19:04, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

  1. Again, just nitpicking, but the last sentence implies that Ebya would be allowed to produce right away. Maybe add "eventually" somewhere in the sentence? Corellian PremierRobotechAll along the watchtower 03:03, April 24, 2012 (UTC)