Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Nack Movers/Legends

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Nack Movers

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote —Jedi Kasra (comlink) 17:28, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
  2. ECvote SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 23:36, September 1, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Menkooroo 02:18, September 15, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Pending Xd's objection below. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 18:55, September 15, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Nice. I like it.--ID-21 Dolphin 23:41, September 15, 2010 (UTC)
  6. ECvote -- 1358 (Talk) 18:24, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. Whatcha cryin' for?
    • Not sure if "heavyset" is necessary in the intro?—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:26, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
      • Removed.
    • Context on Coruscant in intro and possibly the bio.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:30, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
      • Both contexted.
    • Is "powerful" needed in the intro, in describing the fact he was a murderer?
      • Changed to something that describes him better.
    • Link Death in the intro.
      • Linked.
    • Good stuff, Lee.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 23:30, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Jujiggum
    • Do we have an article for his apartment?
      • Created.
        • If the apartment belonged to his girlfriend, then shouldn't it be Ione Marcy's apartment? Also, the intro right now says that the entire complex belonged to Marcy; not just the one apartment. Is this true? Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 14:10, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
          • Fixed and moved.
            • Please be very careful when moving articles—the name you moved it to had an incorrect spelling, and thus it had to be moved again, meaning I had to go and fix several double redirects. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 14:46, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
    • "he bought a lightsaber from the Patrolian Bannamu and took it to his apartment in a condominium complex and to his girlfriend Ione Marcy." Hmm, not really following your meaning here. Do you mean he gave the lightsaber to Marcy? That he specifically took it to her? Please check this.
      • Fixed.
    • Is the phrase "hatchet man" actually used to describe him during the episode? If so, this should probably be included in the P&T, too.
      • Not really, he is said to be an assassin and therefore he is a hatchet man.
        • Then this part of the intro is redundant. You just said he was an assassin, so why do you need to say so again? Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 14:10, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
          • Removed.
    • Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 20:12, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
    • One more thing: does the source specifically say he was a strong and dangerous murderer? Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 14:10, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
      • Sinube states both that Movers is a dangerous one in the Underworld and notes that he was "stronger then many other people. Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:35, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
    • Please add more quotes to the article. I am certain there is one spoken by Marcy or Cryar about him or his death (even if it is one of their lies), and perhaps Sinube's statement about his strength could go in the P&T. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 14:46, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
      • Because I cannot add the English version myself I asked JMAS. Clone Commander Lee Talk 15:10, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
        • Added one quote. Clone Commander Lee Talk 15:15, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
          • Is there no other one where they refer to him more specifically? Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 00:56, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
            • JMAS wants to add it soon. Meanwhile I search a little bit myself. Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:08, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
              • Okay, also, please check the sentence that was just added to the article, verify it, and make sure its placement is appropriate. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 18:34, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
                • Checked and removed unverified info. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:28, September 8, 2010 (UTC)
                  • JMAS seems to have problems with the quotes. I'm sure I can add some in the future, but is it fine for now? Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:07, September 13, 2010 (UTC)
                    • I'll strike for now since you do at least have a lead quote, but please do make sure to add another quote or two asap. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 18:55, September 15, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Hey hey, you you
    • Just making it a formal objection --- the intro still contains the unverified "girlfriend". Menkooroo 12:33, September 8, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Lawn mowers
    • The intro is three rows while the body is five+four words. Please cut down on the intro.
      • Cut.
    • That he resided in the apartment is intro-only.
    • Context on Ione Marcy in the body.
      • Fixed.
    • Airdate for Lightsaber Lost?
      • Added.
    • I'm sure there are more applicable categories.
      • Added.
        • Aphabetize them. -- 1358 (Talk) 17:28, September 14, 2010 (UTC)
          • Fixed. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:34, September 14, 2010 (UTC)
            • No. -- 1358 (Talk) 14:24, September 15, 2010 (UTC)
              • Now. Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:24, September 15, 2010 (UTC)
                • No, it has still not been fixed. Here's a hint: Assassins comes first, since it starts with A. This shouldn't be hard, Lee. -- 1358 (Talk) 18:31, September 15, 2010 (UTC)
                  • Sigh. Next time I try to read completely what your objection is. Fixed. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:56, September 16, 2010 (UTC)
    • -- 1358 (Talk) 14:58, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

  • This would probably be best on the talk page, but how do we know Ione Marcy was Nack's girlfriend? Last I checked, we had no idea who his girlfriend was.--BonslywizardTrade Federation(Send a transmission...It's perfectly legal!) 16:40, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
    • As it was her aparment, she had to be his girlfriend. Or do you think he goes to another apartment. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:08, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
      • People of different sexes are roommates all the time. If there's no source identifying them as dating, then the article can't make that assumption. Menkooroo 14:03, September 6, 2010 (UTC)
  • Just to clarify --- nothing about him in the TCW Character Encyclopedia? If he's even mentioned in Ione's entry, it needs to go in the source list. Menkooroo 01:17, September 6, 2010 (UTC)