Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Msqito

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Msqito

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:12, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: These bugs all have awful names...

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. Trip391 (talk) 00:30, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
  2. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 15:28, December 24, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:17, December 27, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 18:30, December 30, 2013 (UTC)

Object

  1. Trip
    • The second part of the second sentence isn't working for me: "a species whose on average stood at 1.8 meters tall." Trip391 (talk) 00:21, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
      • Changed it a little, whose should of been who. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:26, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
        • I feel "on average" could go in commas, but otherwise perfect. Trip391 (talk) 00:30, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
  2. 501st
    • 203 words! Needs an intro :) 501st dogma(talk) 00:37, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
      • I feel like I should probably learn to word count articles more often... Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:49, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
    • "The insects had a relatively large wingspan and were of an equal length to the height of an adult Human..." It's a bit unclear here whether one wing is as tall as a Human, or the wingspan was as tall as a Human. Or are they lengthwise as large as a Human? If it is one of the former two options, I'm pretty sure you cannot use 1.8 meters as the length in the infobox, as that should be the head-to-tail length.
      • Its their body length, which I think is now clearer. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:17, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
    • In your Bio section, you do not specifically state that the msqito's adult habitat is the forest.
    • You should move the part about them laying their eggs and flocking in the Bio to a separate section dubbed Behavior. 501st dogma(talk) 15:52, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
  3. Exiled Jedi
    • The intro says the eggs were laid in water, while the body says near water. Which is correct?--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 06:46, December 27, 2013 (UTC)

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