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Mol Ni'mai
- Nominated by: OLIOSTER (talk) 13:42, November 8, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I bring you more from SWG!
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SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 08:46, November 9, 2010 (UTC)- Despite of your RC spam… ;-) 1358 (Talk) 16:58, November 10, 2010 (UTC)
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Could you elaborate more in the bts? Instead of just saying "his quest" and assuming that the reading can make the link, you should specify it more directly, and also mention that the player plays as the spacer.SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 07:28, November 9, 2010 (UTC)- Addressed. OLIOSTER (talk) 07:36, November 9, 2010 (UTC)
He, the quest to learn the armor's construction, Eh, still not completely clear. A direct statement along the lines of "Ni'mai initiates the <quest name> quest, which teaches the player, playing as a spacer, to create R.I.S armor." would be better.SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 08:15, November 9, 2010 (UTC)- Alright, added your suggestion. Would like to note that the quest has no name in the game (it doesn't appear in your quest journal, having been added before it) so I just called it the R.I.S armor quest. OLIOSTER (talk) 08:21, November 9, 2010 (UTC)
- Changed it to just "a quest" so readers aren't misled into believing that it's an actual quest name. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 08:46, November 9, 2010 (UTC)
- Alright, added your suggestion. Would like to note that the quest has no name in the game (it doesn't appear in your quest journal, having been added before it) so I just called it the R.I.S armor quest. OLIOSTER (talk) 08:21, November 9, 2010 (UTC)
- Addressed. OLIOSTER (talk) 07:36, November 9, 2010 (UTC)
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